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A Fair View

Some days its hard to figure out where it all went, Or if there was anything really there to begin with Some days I’m blind And I’m lost, And sometimes I’m scared. But then sometimes I’m comfortable being lost, And I rather enjoy being blind, That way what I can’t see Can’t be close to hurting me No vision to remind me Of everything I should be, And these things never change And it’s probably for the best To be lost without a reason And without a care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/14/2018 3:34:00 PM
It is so freeing to be lost without caring. This is an art form that very few people can master. I am so thrilled that you wrote this! A FAV for me, Brooke.
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Brooke Noble
Date: 10/15/2018 1:59:00 AM
thanks so much Caren, I'm new here so just getting used to the place, but you commenting on my work makes me feel very warm and welcome. I appreciate the feedback and positive strokes.

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