A Faerie Box Quest

Nattie and Thomas had left home
In search of the magic Portal,
And there find: Vilenist, a song,
Faerie dust--to save the mortals.

"There it is, Nattie! I can see it!"
Screamed Thomas with so much delight,
Not seeing the stream, fell in it.
"You can swim when everything's right!"

Scolded Nattie, "But now, let's go!"
Then she helped Thomas from the cool stream.
They followed the path to the glow
From the Portal refracting beam.

"Okay. This is it...you ready?"
"Yes,  Nattie. She needs us! Let's jump!"
Jump they did. But, not quite steady
Landing on a toadstool...KER--THUMP!

"Ouch! Get off my head!", cried Toadstool.
"Why don't you watch where you're going?"
Scuff'ling to their feet--Nattie, cool--
Said, "We're sorry! No need blowing!

"We didn't mean to land on you."
"Well...all right then...Am I bleeding?!"
Gigg'ling, Nattie said, "Not a bruise!"
"I'm Larch Bolete! Your names...Seedling?"

I'm Nattie...Thomas, my brother.
And we're here to see Vilenist.
Can you tell which way or other
We need to go: North, South, West, East?"

"Gladly my dear, but do take care.
Night is coming--strange things about--
If you must go, then East is where
She'll be...Your hearts must be quite stout!"

With smiles and thank you, East they went.
Night had come, but their path was bright.
"WOW! Look, Nattie! Magnificient!
Everything glows--You see this, right?"

"Yes, Thomas, but do you see"--"NAT!!"
Fluid rainbows--quicker than quick!
Spark'ling colours--this way and that!
And music that changed with each click!

Before they could say one more thing,
The most beautiful Rainbow Fae
Was playing harmonics on strings
Of her violin--that could fly!

She was colours and ice crystals.
She moved like the air and could change.
Her hair, rainbow-streaked--a minstrel
Whose music healed, saved, spoke through planes.

"Nattie Grace snd Thomas, you're here!
I've been expecting you, my dear.
There isn't much time, but don't fear,
I have what you came for quite near."

Vilenist, then presented two
Items: a simple box of Great Oak Wood,
And a small twinkling jar of blue,
With instructions, they understood.

"In this box, is the song you seek.
You mustn't look!  You mustn't peek!
To save your mortals so unique.
This jar: Faerie Dust--for each cheek."

She took them to the Portal base
And blessed them both as they passed through
With a song and faerie dust face,
"Where you believe there is magic...you will find it."

deborah burch©
5/27/2012 

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Date: 6/2/2012 9:15:00 PM
DEB, a wonderful congratulations in the "Welcome to the world of fantasy" contest~ :-) PD
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:57:00 PM
Entertaining write :) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/1/2012 12:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Deb! Wow, I'm glad I got to read it again. I still believe! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/30/2012 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "World of Fantasy" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/30/2012 9:36:00 PM
thanks Carol :-)
Date: 5/30/2012 8:58:00 AM
Cap'n Deb huge congrats on your win, sounds like a great place to live...David
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Date: 5/30/2012 9:35:00 PM
:-) thank you David...
Date: 5/29/2012 5:01:00 PM
such attention to details and descriptions, deborah... sweet congrats!..:) huggs
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/29/2012 10:42:00 PM
thank you so much nette :-)
Date: 5/29/2012 12:36:00 PM
very nice Deb..congrats on your win
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/29/2012 10:41:00 PM
thank you joseph :)
Date: 5/29/2012 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations Debs loved it first time round xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/29/2012 12:22:00 PM
Thank you~GG~…love ya, deb
Date: 5/29/2012 8:06:00 AM
Awesome Debs..well worth the wait I loved it, congrats on your 5th place win xx Hugs xx
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Date: 5/29/2012 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Trace!! (soupmail) love ya, debs
Date: 5/28/2012 10:37:00 PM
wow..pd
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Date: 5/29/2012 12:28:00 AM
;-) thanks PD....you okay? love you bunches!!! deb
Date: 5/28/2012 7:12:00 PM
I love this write, Deb! Such a charming childhood tale. I believe!!! Best wishes in the contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/29/2012 12:29:00 AM
:-) thank you sweet Rhonda....keep believing! ;) love ya bunches, deb
Date: 5/28/2012 3:37:00 PM
wow Deborah this is wonderful, makes the reader want to be there. love this. harry
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/29/2012 12:31:00 AM
thank you sooo much 'arry!! I am honoured...love ya, deb
Date: 5/28/2012 8:49:00 AM
A fantastic faerie fantasy... Lovin' it... ;-) Terry
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Date: 5/28/2012 10:05:00 AM
:-) thank you so much Terry, I am touched deeply...big hugs, love, deb
Date: 5/28/2012 8:37:00 AM
Love it well done had me smiling all the way through xx
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Date: 5/28/2012 10:01:00 AM
:) Thank you ~GG~ I am highly honourd by your kindness--love ya, deb :)
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