A Dying Heart

The pain grips me
It steals my life away
Just like a parasite or a leech
Drop by drop it steals my essence away. 

I'm begging you to save me 
Because I know you’re up there. 
Stop this faulty heart 
Take away the snare. 

A quick one 
Very sudden and clear 
Take me up to heaven
Take me to my home. 

It’s not of love I suffer 
But of vacancy and fear 
For I don’t know when 
My beating heart will someday stop my dear.

It’s not of lovers that I am jealous 
But of their loyal hearts,  
Which I wish belonged to me 
But wishes are something 
That are never to be had. Only to be feared.

I see the golden light 
Feeling so eerily free.
I walk by the heavenly moonlight. 
And will walk for all eternity. 

BY
Amanda.M.Miller
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cooper Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 7:29 PM
great write
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:09 AM
thanks a million
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your emotional poetry tonight.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv...
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:10 AM
i've never had such a beautiful welcome ever. this site holds some of the nicest people in the world... thank you so very much linda
Roberts Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 12:30 PM
wonderful read dear ( a few typing errors) this piece is full of passion and angst and I enjoyed reading it today
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:12 AM
thank you ... and those errors will be taken care of. thank you for bringing them to my attension. much appreciated. and thank you for your sweet world they mean the world to me.
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May 26, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Excellent writing here - Keep up the good work A pleasure reading :)
Miller Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:13 AM
its a pleasure knowing that it'll be read. thank you so very much stephen.
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