Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

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A Dream Kiss

Too old, all I can do is dream,
Love is great theme.
Sleep must be deep,
Kiss me asleep.

Fragrant Spring, bright flowers, no snow,
Flora on show.
Soft lips brush mine
Of cherry wine.

Sleepily I wake in foul mood,
smell of hot food
Sally smiling,
Kiss beguiling.

21 July 2021



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Sara Kendrick March 9, 2023 at 1:56 PM What a repertoire of wild dreams you must have. Thanks for sharing this passionate one and I enjoy your visits to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 5:49 AM Back with congrats, Victor!

Sam Kauffman July 27, 2021 at 10:22 AM Congratulations on your win Victor! It seems to me we are never too old for a kiss to welcome the day or close the evening! Nicely penned and quite romantic!

Joseph May July 26, 2021 at 12:41 PM Congrats on your win Victor, Nicely penned.. Victor Buhagiar July 26, 2021 at 9:24 PM Thank you. Regards

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 26, 2021 at 11:32 AM I am back with congratulations on your win, Victor. Nice work! Evelyn :)

Alexis Y. July 26, 2021 at 10:33 AM Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex July 26, 2021 at 10:22 AM It's a nice dream poem. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith July 26, 2021 at 9:36 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful dream write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Marilene Evans July 26, 2021 at 9:11 AM Congratulations, Victor! Lovely.

Marilene Evans July 26, 2021 at 9:10 AM Congratulations, Victor! Lovely.

Eve Roper July 24, 2021 at 9:28 PM a great write, that i think Brian would love in his contest.

Supraja Kannan July 24, 2021 at 6:50 AM This reads better than mine... Beautifully done...

Delice Arleen Skelly July 23, 2021 at 11:01 PM Poignant dream time with a beguiling kiss, magical...Delice

Kim Rodrigues July 23, 2021 at 11:13 AM So enticing! So lovely!

Alexis Y. July 23, 2021 at 9:16 AM Wow! Victor, You penned a well written romantic entry for the contest. There’s nothing wrong with dreaming. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet July 22, 2021 at 4:53 PM Beautiful and lovely poem, sweet dreams are always a good heal for the spirit. Kindest regards

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2021 at 4:03 PM I really like this, Victor. What is with food remedies?

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 22, 2021 at 11:24 AM Sweet dreams make for a pleasant night. A lovely poem, Victor. Hugs.

Beryl Edmonds July 22, 2021 at 9:23 AM In beautiful dreams Victor, one is never too old to remember the kisses and blisses and magic moments long passed… Belle

M. L. Kiser July 22, 2021 at 9:12 AM Nicely crafted with feeling; a good solid read.

Mike Bayles July 22, 2021 at 7:04 AM Very nice, Victor. Nice rhyme. You write this kind of love poem well.

Vijay Pandit July 22, 2021 at 5:08 AM Love is indeed a great theme, Victor--dream or not. Much joy to think about the beloved.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2021 at 4:47 AM - At least you did not forget this feeling, Victor :) - Dreams are better than nothing - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh July 22, 2021 at 4:22 AM Lovely verse and vision. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Denise Retro July 22, 2021 at 4:04 AM It's good to grow old and have someone who'd kiss you asleep and kiss you awake. A dream come true.

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