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A Dream Kiss

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Too old, all I can do is dream, Love is great theme. Sleep must be deep, Kiss me asleep. Fragrant Spring, bright flowers, no snow, Flora on show. Soft lips brush mine Of cherry wine. Sleepily I wake in foul mood, smell of hot food Sally smiling, Kiss beguiling. 21 July 2021 Placed 3

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2023 1:56:00 PM
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What a repertoire of wild dreams you must have. Thanks for sharing this passionate one and I enjoy your visits to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 5:49:00 AM
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Back with congrats, Victor!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 10:22:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win Victor! It seems to me we are never too old for a kiss to welcome the day or close the evening! Nicely penned and quite romantic!
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Joseph May
Date: 7/26/2021 12:41:00 PM
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Congrats on your win Victor, Nicely penned..
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/26/2021 9:24:00 PM
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Thank you. Regards
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/26/2021 11:32:00 AM
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I am back with congratulations on your win, Victor. Nice work! Evelyn :)
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:33:00 AM
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Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/26/2021 10:22:00 AM
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It's a nice dream poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2021 9:36:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. A wonderful dream write. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Marilene Evans
Date: 7/26/2021 9:11:00 AM
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Congratulations, Victor! Lovely.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 7/26/2021 9:10:00 AM
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Congratulations, Victor! Lovely.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/24/2021 9:28:00 PM
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a great write, that i think Brian would love in his contest.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/24/2021 6:50:00 AM
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This reads better than mine... Beautifully done...
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 7/23/2021 11:01:00 PM
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Poignant dream time with a beguiling kiss, magical...Delice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2021 11:13:00 AM
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So enticing! So lovely!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/23/2021 9:16:00 AM
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Wow! Victor, You penned a well written romantic entry for the contest. There’s nothing wrong with dreaming. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/22/2021 4:53:00 PM
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Beautiful and lovely poem, sweet dreams are always a good heal for the spirit. Kindest regards
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2021 4:03:00 PM
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I really like this, Victor. What is with food remedies?
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 11:24:00 AM
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Sweet dreams make for a pleasant night. A lovely poem, Victor. Hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/22/2021 9:23:00 AM
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In beautiful dreams Victor, one is never too old to remember the kisses and blisses and magic moments long passed… Belle
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/22/2021 9:12:00 AM
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Nicely crafted with feeling; a good solid read.
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Mike Bayles
Date: 7/22/2021 7:04:00 AM
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Very nice, Victor. Nice rhyme. You write this kind of love poem well.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2021 5:08:00 AM
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Love is indeed a great theme, Victor--dream or not. Much joy to think about the beloved.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2021 4:47:00 AM
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- At least you did not forget this feeling, Victor :) - Dreams are better than nothing - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 7/22/2021 4:22:00 AM
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Lovely verse and vision. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Denise Retro
Date: 7/22/2021 4:04:00 AM
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It's good to grow old and have someone who'd kiss you asleep and kiss you awake. A dream come true.
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