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A Dream

I have this dream every night Recurrent, always at midnight That everything will be alright Indicative, your future is bright Sweat, you will soon celebrate As nothing come from a silver plate And in life it is never too late Coz destiny is an inevitable fate Dream big, the sky is the limit Hard work pays off, never quit Like a firefly, you need no moonlit To shine on you, you're already lit Your journey is full of deception Cramped of fake realers combination As many can't wait for your detention Silently, hating on your reputation You plummeted forward in my dream Slowly but surely, like a winter stream Unmistakably, it runs in your bloodstream How I wish, I were you in my dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/2/2017 3:15:00 AM
Your form of a poem gives set pattern of rhyme scheme, stanza form, and refrain is called a fixed form, examples of which include: ballade, limerick, pantoum, rondeau, sestina, sonnet, triolet, and villanelle. Used in this sense, form is closely related to genre.
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Paavo Johannes
Date: 1/11/2018 4:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for your positive comments. I'd really love to reply to all of them... and I have been reading your work too. Happy you are from Namibia! :-)

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