A Dream

I have this dream every night
Recurrent, always at midnight
That everything will be alright
Indicative, your future is bright

Sweat, you will soon celebrate
As nothing come from a silver plate
And in life it is never too late
Coz destiny is an inevitable fate

Dream big, the sky is the limit
Hard work pays off, never quit
Like a firefly, you need no moonlit
To shine on you, you're already lit

Your journey is full of deception
Cramped of fake realers combination
As many can't wait for your detention
Silently, hating on your reputation

You plummeted forward in my dream
Slowly but surely, like a winter stream
Unmistakably, it runs in your bloodstream
How I wish, I were you in my dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/2/2017 3:15:00 AM
Your form of a poem gives set pattern of rhyme scheme, stanza form, and refrain is called a fixed form, examples of which include: ballade, limerick, pantoum, rondeau, sestina, sonnet, triolet, and villanelle. Used in this sense, form is closely related to genre.
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Paavo Johannes
Date: 1/11/2018 4:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for your positive comments. I'd really love to reply to all of them... and I have been reading your work too. Happy you are from Namibia! :-)
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