Garnett Fireline Poet Rhyme

A Dream

The figure was celestial
sensual was its presence
with a full figure
conjuring up feelings intense

The spirit reminded me of woman
The way it guided me gently
guiding me through the desert land
To the ripe fields of plenty

To a peaceful place by the sea
Enraptured and captured by its illumination
As the dusk of the light came over me
Then I woke up to a dream of imagination

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Bonnie Jennings May 19, 2016 at 5:36 PM Interesting poem and I'm wondering if this was Succubus in your dream? I recently wrote a poem about her at another poetry site during a contest... Your poem is surreal and pretty descriptive of how she operates.. Garnett Fireline May 20, 2016 at 5:04 PM Hello Bonnie, Thanks for your kind words. This poem is based largely on the holy spirit and it being feminine in nature. Even being somewhat sensual in nature and at the same time spiritual.