A Dream

Endless tracks cut a geoglyphic maze  
through the grass 
A sudden gust whirls a messy cocktail  
into the summer air  
Grassy hills roll playfully in the distance 
Closer to my heart,  
she glides eloquently down a fragile track 
Cracks in the path forming an intriguing 
array of shapes  
You could choose one, line it with blood 
Colour it with emotion 
And still be no closer to the induction of  
a lasting heartbeat 
Flowers adorn her hair, striking an 
irrepressible  
innocence upon her weary eyes 
She sings the sweetest song, though 
a fair distance from the past I know 
It starts with a sharp shrill as if  
borne of childbirth 
Rises to meet my twisting brows in 
a crescendo of glee 
Settles on an ingrained compulsion 
to sing in tandem
Insisting quietly, softly,
That when the song ends, 
something must colour 
the emptiness inside
Like our timeless wishes coming true
she dreams this dream
for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/18/2014 12:25:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:55:00 PM
Dear Lebo: Good dream tale. Nice. I like this poem. Leon
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:56:00 PM
A truly fine dream . One that gives the reader visions of mountains of love.. Bravo!
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:20:00 PM
A good dream.
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