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A Dream

A childhood dream A memory from the past A life that I wish could have last A time forgotten An era wasted A chance missed A dying moment A love lost You're the one that I want

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2010 12:53:00 PM
That cute >.<
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Date: 2/16/2010 8:39:00 AM
i Love it.goood jop dude!
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:22:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Dillon. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:52:00 AM
I like the decrescendo of the verses, all starting with "A," but I wish it had a more unique ending. Watch the grammatical structure as well.
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