A Dream

A childhood dream 
A memory from the past
A life that I wish could have last
A time forgotten 
An era wasted
A chance missed
A dying moment
A love lost

You're the one that I want
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 19, 2010 at 12:53 PM
That cute >.<
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February 16, 2010 at 8:39 AM
i Love it.goood jop dude!
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January 5, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Dillon. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 5, 2010 at 10:52 AM
I like the decrescendo of the verses, all starting with "A," but I wish it had a more unique ending. Watch the grammatical structure as well.
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