A Dream

I wear my hat real low so you cannot read my eyes Don’t get too close You might fall in I am a bottomless chasm in disguise All I seem to do is fall Will there ever be a time when I rise? Grounded like a rock Trying so hard to reach my dream that floats by like a cloud in the rainy skies Will I ever grow wings to chase those dreams? Or is this the beginning of dreams demise?

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/10/2009 3:09:00 PM

i wear my sunglasses to hide my eyes,eyes are the reflectors of the heart and soul--and like your hate my sunglasses work miracles to hide emtions of shyness,peepingness:)sadness,they are a good barrier for strangers-well penned ,i had a thought to do a poem about sunglasses but you did it better than i could ever do ti with your hat--i ll try the hat:)--very original writes--well penned once more---charma