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A Dozen Roses

A Dozen Roses:

Petals in the wind
crying a crimson river
on moonlit snow

©deborah burch
25012013

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/10/2013 9:55:00 AM

Lost hearts...nice...jimbo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2013 5:17:00 PM

So much said in so few words..Congrats on your win..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2013 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Deborah it's lovely to see back, missed you xx

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/2/2013 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!! :)

Michael Smith

Date: 2/1/2013 11:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win.

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/1/2013 9:29:00 AM

This gives me a distinct image...well done !! Congrats on your win !!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/1/2013 2:24:00 AM

Ah yes, I remember this little gem...congrats to Ms Beauchamps (you are french aren't you, Desiree?)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2013 9:16:00 PM

Deborah, a very deep entry... love the moonlit snow, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/31/2013 6:20:00 PM

Congrad's on your win, Deb keep up the great work. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 1/31/2013 5:45:00 PM

congrats on your win Deb

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/28/2013 10:37:00 AM

Dear Susan, this is breathtakingly beautiful imagery. Excellent creative haiku. Mahalo for your comments too.

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2013 5:14:00 PM

wonderful haiku....

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/27/2013 4:19:00 AM

'Crying a crimson river'...Wow!...doesn't get any better than that - Tyson

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/27/2013 12:39:00 AM

I like this haiku. Keep writing them, Jancarl

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/26/2013 7:14:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Deborah! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2013 6:40:00 PM

Oh how I have missed my co-pilot! SO wonderful to hear from you! Are you all settled in now? Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2013 11:08:00 AM

So nice to read one of your poems again Deborah! - Have a lovely weekend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/26/2013 6:47:00 AM

By the happy, carefree bio pic, you seem like my kind of gal! LOL Love your wee Haiku... hugs, Jack xox

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/26/2013 10:11:00 AM

Awww. Thank you so much Jack. Your kindness is deeply touching and greatly appreciated. Big Huggss. Deb

A Dozen Roses

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