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A Dozen Roses

A Dozen Roses:

Petals in the wind
crying a crimson river
on moonlit snow

©deborah burch
25012013

flowerlost lovelovewinterhaiku

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James Marshall Goff

March 10, 2013 at 9:55 AM

Lost hearts...nice...jimbo

Sara Kendrick

February 3, 2013 at 5:17 PM

So much said in so few words..Congrats on your win..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 3, 2013 at 1:08 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Deborah it's lovely to see back, missed you xx

Christopher Bunton

February 2, 2013 at 7:02 AM

Congratulations on your win!! :)

Michael Smith

February 1, 2013 at 11:58 AM

Congrats on your win.

Debra Squyres

February 1, 2013 at 9:29 AM

This gives me a distinct image...well done !! Congrats on your win !!

Tim Ryerson

February 1, 2013 at 2:24 AM

Ah yes, I remember this little gem...congrats to Ms Beauchamps (you are french aren't you, Desiree?)

Poet Destroyer A

January 31, 2013 at 9:16 PM

Deborah, a very deep entry... love the moonlit snow, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

January 31, 2013 at 6:20 PM

Congrad's on your win, Deb keep up the great work. Light & Love

Joseph May

January 31, 2013 at 5:45 PM

congrats on your win Deb

Connie Marcum Wong

January 28, 2013 at 10:37 AM

Dear Susan, this is breathtakingly beautiful imagery. Excellent creative haiku. Mahalo for your comments too.

Joseph May

January 27, 2013 at 5:14 PM

wonderful haiku....

Tim Ryerson

January 27, 2013 at 4:19 AM

'Crying a crimson river'...Wow!...doesn't get any better than that - Tyson

Jancarl Campi

January 27, 2013 at 12:39 AM

I like this haiku. Keep writing them, Jancarl

Kim Merryman

January 26, 2013 at 7:14 PM

Beautiful haiku, Deborah! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

January 26, 2013 at 6:40 PM

Oh how I have missed my co-pilot! SO wonderful to hear from you! Are you all settled in now? Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 26, 2013 at 11:08 AM

So nice to read one of your poems again Deborah! - Have a lovely weekend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

January 26, 2013 at 6:47 AM

By the happy, carefree bio pic, you seem like my kind of gal! LOL Love your wee Haiku... hugs, Jack xox

Deborah Burch

January 26, 2013 at 10:11 AM

Awww. Thank you so much Jack. Your kindness is deeply touching and greatly appreciated. Big Huggss. Deb

A Dozen Roses

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