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It started gradually. One drink turns into two. An alcoholic on the mend falls off the wagon; lulled by temptation bit by bit. It's a slow descent into catastrophe. A steep downward spiral. (Yalto) Spiral Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann Date written: 06/13/2020 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 6/23/2020 8:02:00 AM
Honest thoughts Edward. This is a splendid write. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi!:-) Same to you!
Date: 6/14/2020 12:29:00 PM
Excellent entry, dear friend. It's a wonderful poem. God bless you with love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/14/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Gina:-) God bless.
Date: 6/13/2020 10:50:00 AM
A spiraling we will go...great entry my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, WW:-)
Date: 6/13/2020 7:16:00 AM
Your poem certainly fits the spiral theme, Edward--a potent example of how people fall in that temptation.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2020 7:21:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay:-) Good morning, my friend...

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