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A Doubt

What time is it now? There’s no importance in sand Please keep that in mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/3/2009 8:59:00 PM
Great haiku! I like how you pointed out that sand does not exactly tell us what time it is.
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Date: 5/30/2009 8:57:00 AM
Interesting reflection, leaving the reader with something to think about. I've already read it a few times. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/27/2009 11:47:00 PM
a very interesting thought provoking Haiku,very well thought out,,well done,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:08:00 PM
Awesome senryu! Good write hermano! - eduardo
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