A Doubt

What time is it now?
There’s no importance in sand
Please keep that in mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 8:59 PM
Great haiku! I like how you pointed out that sand does not exactly tell us what time it is.
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May 30, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Interesting reflection, leaving the reader with something to think about. I've already read it a few times. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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May 27, 2009 at 11:47 PM
a very interesting thought provoking Haiku,very well thought out,,well done,,blessings..Cecil
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May 25, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Awesome senryu! Good write hermano! - eduardo
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