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A Dolphin's Bliss

sounds of the ocean

dance ... stripped choreography 

it's a dolphin's bliss

haiku

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Raul Moreno

April 21, 2010 at 5:20 PM

I left you some soup mail...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

October 4, 2009 at 10:44 AM

love it, hot poems list

Raul Moreno

September 30, 2009 at 12:06 PM

Nice to see you have a hot poem Marco, congrats...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

September 29, 2009 at 1:03 PM

This rocks like the sea's waves, Marco! Indeed, the dolphin's have their own choreography and it's so much fun to watch them frolic as they dance atop the ocean. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Jessica Arteaga

September 27, 2009 at 10:41 PM

and what a bliss it is especially for this such creature, nice poem

Corinne Curcio

September 24, 2009 at 9:07 AM

And our bliss to watch them, if we're so fortunate. Beautifully done

Nadia Shahwan

September 21, 2009 at 7:46 AM

Beautiful poem. Pls re-entre: it's a dolphin's bliss...to count 5cyl. All the best.

Raul Moreno

September 20, 2009 at 10:24 PM

Amazing imagery Marco...those first two lines grabbed me...Raul

September 20, 2009 at 5:36 PM

Sea life has always fascinated me. Thanks for sharing this creative view. I really like the second line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen