Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Distant Sky

We both had wings clipped yet we could still fly...
A loss for words moistened a tear that wouldn't dry...
Now just two lost souls in the pouring rain...
Left to fly free and hold an overflowing pain...
I couldn't write poem that would turn your head...
Now stranded on a path where a heart sits dead...
Even into today I can still taste that sweet smile...
Its more then words or worlds that create these miles...
Each day I blow a kiss to a cloudy distant sky...
Hoping that just one day one kiss may find your eye...


"Lost Love Contest"
6/3/2012

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 16, 2012 at 9:59 PM a "Breakfast at Tiffany's" write .. the rain and the tears and the emotion so sweet and lovely.. one of your very best Michael luv.. JG is missing u so.. xoxo.. see hair long again.. even longer still and oh so blond now we are at beach for Summer fun.. oh..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 15, 2012 at 8:50 AM Michael, a belated congrats to you in Gail's contest! Your is beautiful! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:43 PM Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Remembering A Lost Love" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2012 at 9:34 PM HELLO, MICHAEL, HOPE YOU ARE WELL , congratulations in Gail's heartfelt contest ;-) Good night*PD

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2012 at 8:53 PM Another gem from your pen, Michael. Glad to see these winners so I could get the chance to notice this poem of yours. Very well done, my friend.

Gwendolen Song June 12, 2012 at 6:08 PM Phew! This is fabulous...Congrats on painting such emotion with excellence, Michael. :) Gwendolen

Kash Poet June 12, 2012 at 12:03 PM Wonderful poem Michel.Congrats on your win.

David Williams June 12, 2012 at 2:39 AM Michael congrats on your win, excellent...David

Elizabeth Wesley June 11, 2012 at 12:08 PM A touch of angst, a breath of love and I have such a special verse to revel in! :) How's you book doing, must be a millionaire now - hope so Michael.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2012 at 3:57 PM Hi you romantic man......love this one Michael. - Have a lovely and romantic weekend for you and your wife. - oxox Anne-Lise

Dinda Minardi June 5, 2012 at 8:22 AM A heartfelt write, Michael. Sometimes it's funny to keep on waiting someone that never expects you.. But yeah, that's what our hearts been trained for, isn't it? To taste bitter til you find the sweet. Sorry for mumbling around, I'll stop now :D

Tracy Edwards June 5, 2012 at 7:24 AM Lovely T1 xx Hugs & Luv xx

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 5, 2012 at 2:37 AM WOWOWOWOW UTTERLY STUNNING WRITE!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script June 3, 2012 at 7:54 PM Sounds like a winner Michael!! Excellent work of art!!

Lucilla Carrillo June 3, 2012 at 12:11 PM This is very sweet. A distant sky. You know from the top it don't seem like it's too far, but from the ground, it's a thousand miles away. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

Russell Sivey June 3, 2012 at 11:40 AM Oh, Wow, Michael, you have written one of the most perfect writes I've ever read! I was completely and utterly touched by this piece of wonderful art! The sadness in this write was touched by your guiding hand, down a soft and enlightening pathway! I just loved your wonderful poem my friend! Great Work!!

David Williams June 3, 2012 at 10:47 AM Michael excellent write my friend..David