A Dirge and a Doggerel

You may as well put the shovel down
If you think this vivisepulture will be my end
I survived the suffocation of a small town
And I'll be damned if this is how I descend

Just another obsequious sycophant 
And a supercilious, self-aggrandizing fraud
In this room there is but one elephant
And it will most certainly break down the façade

I will use the stone you try to bury me with
To build on top of your house a splendid monolith
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Phew, that is strong. I like it. Congratulations, Kai
Hamner Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Thanks, Kai.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 5:34 PM
I too escaped a small town. Congrats on your win.
Vinson Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Trey - so good! I see you with a wry smile and an "Oh, is that right...?" attitude, just as you begin to swing an immense hammer.
Nayak Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Dear T.H, Congrats on your win!SPIRIT TO WIN! Anu:)
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Extremely intense, I found myself immersed into a macabre-esque, meshuggener embrace. It felt as if I was reading an excerpt from a long, lost mad-man. Lengthy, yet invigorating.
Hamner Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thank you, Michael. One of the benefits of the contest themes is that they force you to inhabit a character...sometimes one you wouldn't want to be.
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