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A Difficult Bed

Task forcing on this brute difficult white sheets that don't fit easily on lazy schemes

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2021 7:10:00 AM

Creative. I would hate to be the one having to put on those white sheets that don't fit. I am thinking that society is forcing you to do what you don't want to do. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Vasco Ludovice
Date: 6/28/2021 6:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for your comment! I love your perspective, indeed I think our inner resistance can affect us in a big way. Cheers Vasco

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 5/19/2021 6:27:00 PM

let it stay unmade and messy...nothing worse than a recalcitrant bed that doesn't want to be made.

Vasco Ludovice
Date: 5/21/2021 1:53:00 PM

Ahahah, you really understand my struggle here! Cheers!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/30/2021 12:20:00 PM

Hello Vasco Ludovice, so nice to meet you. That bed does sound to me to be difficult to be made. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2021 10:39:00 AM

Hello Vasco, Ludovice, it must be difficult to sleep in a rough bed. I will. You also have a great day Vasco. Bye for now. Darlene

Vasco Ludovice
Date: 5/2/2021 8:48:00 AM

Darlene, thank you so much for you warming words :), Yes that bed was rough! :) have great day!