A Difficult Bed

Task forcing on this brute
difficult white sheets
that don't fit easily
on lazy schemes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Creative. I would hate to be the one having to put on those white sheets that don't fit. I am thinking that society is forcing you to do what you don't want to do. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Ludovice Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Thank you so much for your comment! I love your perspective, indeed I think our inner resistance can affect us in a big way. Cheers Vasco
Labyrinth Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:27 PM
let it stay unmade and messy...nothing worse than a recalcitrant bed that doesn't want to be made.
Ludovice Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Ahahah, you really understand my struggle here! Cheers!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Hello Vasco Ludovice, so nice to meet you. That bed does sound to me to be difficult to be made. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Hello Vasco, Ludovice, it must be difficult to sleep in a rough bed. I will. You also have a great day Vasco. Bye for now. Darlene
Ludovice Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for you warming words :), Yes that bed was rough! :) have great day!
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