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A Different Way

I wish I could look inside my head
And read every word that I've ever said
Would I recognise myself today
And say
The same things in a different way

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Line Gauthier

November 10, 2022 at 2:59 PM

Really enjoyed your poem ~ a bitesize gem, Shirley ~

Shirley Hawkins

November 20, 2022 at 2:56 PM

Thank you, Line. Take care, Shirley

Paulette Calasibetta

June 26, 2022 at 9:24 AM

Ah...very profound! Congratulations on your winning entry in the contest. :)Paulette

Shirley Hawkins

June 27, 2022 at 7:54 PM

Thank you, Paulette, for your kind, encouraging comment. It was a pleasure to find out I had a placement in the contest and a lovely surprise. Take care, Shirley

Connie Marcum Wong

June 24, 2022 at 3:18 AM

Contemplative questions we might all ask ourselves. Very nice Shirley. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Shirley Hawkins

June 27, 2022 at 8:03 PM

Thank you, Connie. It is very nice of you to make time to write comments to me; they are very appreciated. I did not know I had a placement in the contest, so this was a bonus. My Blessings to you and your family. Take care, Shirley.

Christuraj Alex

June 23, 2022 at 8:44 PM

Saying the same things in a different way. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Shirley Hawkins

June 27, 2022 at 8:19 PM

Thank you, Christuraj. I was surprised to get such kind and encouraging comments on this poem; I appreciate every one of them. My simple poetry helps me think and take my mind off other things that concern me. At nearly 85, my brain is more than a little rusty. I hope you have a pleasant day, Christuraj. Take care, Shirley

John Gondolf

June 23, 2022 at 6:00 AM

About 35 years ago I learned the hard way, to always say what's on your mind because you may not get a second chance. Your words hold much truth, Shirley, congrats on your win. John

Shirley Hawkins

June 27, 2022 at 8:35 PM

Thank you, John. It is nice that PS has these contests and the members who give time to prepare them etc. The topics are many and varied and suit poets of every status. PS has been a great help to me . Thank you again, John, for your encouragement. Take care, Shirley

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