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A Different Aura

Whispy clouds now gray coat the sky A different aura Their presence compliments the fog Both gray coloratura The fog creeps from the creek slowly Comes over hill and vale Gradually saturates trees, all Sun's hidden in cloud's veil One lone cricket sings to my right A whole chorus to left Not a bird sings a tune_quiet No even those in post cleft The day's work has to start so soon Many task lie ahead Just a few minutes to stop_pray For even things unsaid

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/14/2012 1:15:00 PM

Just beautiful, Sara. Really enjoy reading your poetry.

Tanusree Ganguly

Date: 7/14/2012 1:12:00 PM

Your words depict an unforeseen sight..indeed wow.. and thanks a lot for your liking!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/13/2012 3:56:00 PM

Things left unsaid but experienced...this is beautiful! Hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2012 2:27:00 PM

I just love this beautiful write, my friend - enjoyed visualising that creeping fog

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2012 10:13:00 AM

a solid, flowing write, sara.. wonderful rhyme scheme with inspiring theme/ mood... prayer before starting to work is a good thing.. andrea will like this!.. best wishes and huggs! .. hope you are better now!..:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/12/2012 7:34:00 AM

This is truly an incredible write! I really enjoyed the fantastic scenery you planted into my mind! I really love the fog, it's one of my favorite things in nature! I know you do too because you write about it often! The wafting fog creates and aura about the land that compares to none, in my mind anyways! Tremendous poem, Great Work!!