Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

A Different Aura

Whispy clouds now gray coat the sky
A different aura
Their presence compliments the fog
Both gray coloratura

The fog creeps from the creek slowly
Comes over hill and vale
Gradually saturates trees, all
Sun's hidden in cloud's veil

One lone cricket sings to my right
A whole chorus to left
Not a bird sings a tune_quiet
No even those in post cleft

The day's work has to start so soon
Many task lie ahead
Just a few minutes to stop_pray
For even things unsaid  

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Sherese Gooden July 14, 2012 at 1:15 PM Just beautiful, Sara. Really enjoy reading your poetry.

Tanusree Ganguly July 14, 2012 at 1:12 PM Your words depict an unforeseen sight..indeed wow.. and thanks a lot for your liking!

Cecilia Macfarlane July 13, 2012 at 3:56 PM Things left unsaid but experienced...this is beautiful! Hugs

Jack Horne July 13, 2012 at 2:27 PM I just love this beautiful write, my friend - enjoyed visualising that creeping fog

Nette Onclaud July 12, 2012 at 10:13 AM a solid, flowing write, sara.. wonderful rhyme scheme with inspiring theme/ mood... prayer before starting to work is a good thing.. andrea will like this!.. best wishes and huggs! .. hope you are better now!..:)

Russell Sivey July 12, 2012 at 7:34 AM This is truly an incredible write! I really enjoyed the fantastic scenery you planted into my mind! I really love the fog, it's one of my favorite things in nature! I know you do too because you write about it often! The wafting fog creates and aura about the land that compares to none, in my mind anyways! Tremendous poem, Great Work!!