A Deviant Devil 86

A deviant devil with the number 86 blog,
Deviant art with a deviant type of log,
Try to teach the bible to an angel with one hand,
But fingers dipping and licking satans' land?

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deviant with his racism jokes that are crass,
Bothering good girls and and an angel lass,
Laughing bananas with a needle whore,
Not throwing the dark wolves out his door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/14/2011 10:14:00 PM
i will not be corrected by a man with wolves, two of the biggest ones i had, talking to me like this, eyeballs in sin, talking down to me that i did not leave proper bible, i take authority from those living proper christian lives, ONLY, not a knife in the back to his messenger..talking down to me like that..
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:11:00 PM
he clearly said to me you did not leave proper bible, spoke to me like i was dirt, i am on to you now.. speaking to me like this? i am on to you you little wolfy talking to me like i am dirt? don't forget your place..ever..up to your eyeballs with deceit against GOD on his site, his eyeballs, no authority over me, he has no authority to talk to me like this..with wolves scattered all over his site, acting like an unresolved christian, no authority when you are in that state
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:11:00 PM
he clearly said to me you did not leave proper bible, spoke to me like i was dirt, i am on to you now.. speaking to me like this? i am on to you you little wolfy talking to me like i am dirt? don't forget your place..ever..up to your eyeballs with deceit against GOD on his site, his eyeballs, no authority over me, he has no authority to talk to me like this..with wolves scattered all over his site, acting like an unresolved christian, no authority when you are in that state
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
i did it fast..usually i write it offline..and take my time tonight i am only proving my point that i know he is an arse coming on over to my site spouting off his lips on an account with a deviant art site link in the corner with 86, the year he was born, but trying to teach the bible to me, although we were not discussing bible, he said i did not leave proper verses, talking to me like that?
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:04:00 PM
Decent. I liked it overall, but some of the rhymes were too mechanical. Good emotions though.
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