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A Desperate Fight

A black feather perches  in my soul.

Dreams of shouts for freedom,
Emotions built and have died for a reason. His
sadistic unconscious goal of desire. I beg,
“Please No More! “     My
empty words echo only to be heard by my sister’s ghost.
Refuge under my tear stain pillows,
abandoned by my own shadows long ago.
Thoughts of the “Burning Bed”
embrace, but not the courage

Fearful, of inadequacy
inhibit my mind. How much longer is this going to last? His
grunts of ecstasy and relief   has been fulfilled, as I
hope and  hunger for freedom from my ropes of bondage.
Tears, blood stains, and wet guilt embellish my bed.

              “Please No More!

6/18/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 8:55 AM
A sad poem beautifully expressed my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Daniel Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 4:52 AM
A very dark write, Eve, though well expressed:)
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 2:42 PM
- Eve, a really desperate scream ... pain that feels by reading this is really painful .... very well done ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Such deep pain and grief, Eve, in this powerful Acrostic write of yours of 'a desperate fight'. It gave me goosebumps...7. Hugs, Sandra
Vaso Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Wow eve, this is so emotional and the imagery is amazing! hugs!
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Very powerful write ... Great ...
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:00 PM
oh my, a very dark one, Eve. Very emotive and well expressed grief.
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