A Desire

as i look at you the mirror reflects a striking picture of youth
and beauty 

such elegance and allure 
 a desire to hold a desire to love 

i like to hear the out side world ,to hear your such sweet voice 

as i weep i will gentle fall asleep 

 my dreams are forever in your arms .

                                                                      the nightwalker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hawley Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:14 AM
I feel the same way when I am snuggled up in my husband's arms, like on the couch or something.
Chappell Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Thank you indeed great feeling
Gibbons Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:01 AM
sweet, sweet dreams - thanks Jim Gibbons thanks for your kind words
Keys Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:00 PM
elegance with depth, loving meant and stated. thank you, chuck
Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:55 PM
What a wonderful write on A desire. enjoyed it. duncan
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Such loving words and a very beautiful read.Thank you Duncan for your very sweet and kind comments on my poems.Teresa
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October 4, 2010 at 5:14 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Duncan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 10:51 PM
lovely write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:36 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
Miranda Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 5:52 PM
wonderful words....wonderful desire!
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