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A desire

Come back, my love and we shall have some summers again The beauty of sunshine and the showers of rain In the valleys strange and unknown Between the butterflies and silkworm's cocoon Under the canopy blue and endless Across the oceans deep and tasteless The dance of peafowl and the melodies of koel Lavish green meadows and the fragrance of soil The hops of grasshopers and the croaks of frogs and the sober eyes of your's under that dense fog Those sweet whines in bright crystal glasses I miss those days and regret those passes Come back O! beloved and dance with me in the rain Quench the thirst of my soul and relieve my pain _____________________________________________________ Published in 2021:Book soul tales and international poetry anthology First placement~Brian strand poetry contest June 19 2021 Honourable winner~Alison Hodges poetry contest August 16 2021

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Date: 7/24/2021 6:08:00 PM
Dear Aamir, I was swept up by the beauty of your wholehearted and passionate plea. A tender exquisite and expressive piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Aamir Khan
Date: 7/25/2021 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful remarks.Blessings.Aamir
Date: 6/30/2021 2:20:00 AM
An awesome poem, Aamir, brilliant writing:) congratulations too:)
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Aamir Khan
Date: 7/2/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much dear, jo daniel
Date: 6/29/2021 10:13:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL LOVING FEELINGS; ENJOYABLE LOVE THEME WITH GOOD IMAGERY
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Aamir Khan
Date: 7/2/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much dear,Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 6/22/2021 7:50:00 AM
Aamir, congrats on your win with this passionate write! Blessings, Kim M
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Aamir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:15:00 AM
Thank you so much dear kim for appreciation
Date: 6/22/2021 4:40:00 AM
A beauty! Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Congratulations on your top win. Well deserved. A warm welcome to poetry soup.
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Aamir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/21/2021 9:34:00 PM
A desire so ardent, and penned so well, she sure would come back; in the meanwhile do enjoy your top win dear poet.
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Aamir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/21/2021 5:16:00 AM
A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Aamir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so much