A Desire

Come, be my love
     and we shall have some summers again
           The beauty of sunshine
                                and the showers of rain

  In the valleys
        strange and unknown
            Between the butterflies 
               and silkworm's cocoon

   Under the canopy
        blue and endless
         Across the oceans
            deep and tasteless

 The dance of peafowl
       and the melodies of koel
               Lavish green meadows
                  and the fragrance of soil

  The hops of grasshopers 
           and the croaks of frogs
     The sober eyes of your's
                  under that dense fog

  Those sweet whines 
       in bright crystal glasses
           I miss those days
               and regret those passes

  Come back O! beloved
        and dance with me in the rain
             Quench the thirst of my soul 
                                and relieve my pain
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Published in 2021:Book soul tales and international poetry anthology
First placement~Brian strand poetry contest
                                        June 19 2021
Honourable winner~Alison Hodges poetry contest
                                        August 16 2021
Honourable mention~Beata Augstin poetry contest 
                                         December 28 2021
Second placement~BJ Legros kelly poetry contest
                                          Febuary 14 2022
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Legros Kelley Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 1:11 AM
Congratulations on your high placing win, and thank you for being a part of this contest Aamir. God bless you! ~BJ
Khan Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 4:18 AM
Thank you so much
Agustin Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:39 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
Khan Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 11:22 PM
Thank you so much dear poetess.Happy new year to you and your family
Ashley Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 6:08 PM
Dear Aamir, I was swept up by the beauty of your wholehearted and passionate plea. A tender exquisite and expressive piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Khan Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 1:46 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful remarks.Blessings.Aamir
Daniel Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:20 AM
An awesome poem, Aamir, brilliant writing:) congratulations too:)
Khan Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much dear, jo daniel
Bangalee Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:13 PM
BEAUTIFUL LOVING FEELINGS; ENJOYABLE LOVE THEME WITH GOOD IMAGERY
Khan Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much dear,Mahtab Bangalee
Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Aamir, congrats on your win with this passionate write! Blessings, Kim M
Khan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Thank you so much dear kim for appreciation
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 4:40 AM
A beauty! Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Congratulations on your top win. Well deserved. A warm welcome to poetry soup.
Khan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much
Pathak Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:34 PM
A desire so ardent, and penned so well, she sure would come back; in the meanwhile do enjoy your top win dear poet.
Khan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 5:16 AM
A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
Khan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:16 AM
Thank you so much
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