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A Desire

Come, be my love
     and we shall have some summers again
           The beauty of sunshine
                                and the showers of rain

  In the valleys
        strange and unknown
            Between the butterflies 
               and silkworm's cocoon

   Under the canopy
        blue and endless
         Across the oceans
            deep and tasteless

 The dance of peafowl
       and the melodies of koel
               Lavish green meadows
                  and the fragrance of soil

  The hops of grasshopers 
           and the croaks of frogs
     The sober eyes of your's
                  under that dense fog

  Those sweet whines 
       in bright crystal glasses
           I miss those days
               and regret those passes

  Come back O! beloved
        and dance with me in the rain
             Quench the thirst of my soul 
                                and relieve my pain
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Published in 2021:Book soul tales and international poetry anthology
First placement~Brian strand poetry contest
                                        June 19 2021
Honourable winner~Alison Hodges poetry contest
                                        August 16 2021
Honourable mention~Beata Augstin poetry contest 
                                         December 28 2021
Second placement~BJ Legros kelly poetry contest
                                          Febuary 14 2022

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Date: 2/9/2022 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your high placing win, and thank you for being a part of this contest Aamir. God bless you! ~BJ
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 2/14/2022 4:18:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 12/28/2021 10:39:00 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 1/3/2022 11:22:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poetess.Happy new year to you and your family
Date: 7/24/2021 6:08:00 PM
Dear Aamir, I was swept up by the beauty of your wholehearted and passionate plea. A tender exquisite and expressive piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 7/25/2021 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful remarks.Blessings.Aamir
Date: 6/30/2021 2:20:00 AM
An awesome poem, Aamir, brilliant writing:) congratulations too:)
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 7/2/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much dear, jo daniel
Date: 6/29/2021 10:13:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL LOVING FEELINGS; ENJOYABLE LOVE THEME WITH GOOD IMAGERY
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 7/2/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much dear,Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 6/22/2021 7:50:00 AM
Aamir, congrats on your win with this passionate write! Blessings, Kim M
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:15:00 AM
Thank you so much dear kim for appreciation
Date: 6/22/2021 4:40:00 AM
A beauty! Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Congratulations on your top win. Well deserved. A warm welcome to poetry soup.
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/21/2021 9:34:00 PM
A desire so ardent, and penned so well, she sure would come back; in the meanwhile do enjoy your top win dear poet.
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/21/2021 5:16:00 AM
A Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Muhammad AaMir Khan
Date: 6/27/2021 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so much

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