A Dense Peasouper

Puffs of white fog which hung there like frozen cabbage —Donald McCaig

A dense peasouper 
blurs her face in midwinter
coarse grass left standing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 7:37 PM
I like how you were inspired by the frozen cabbage line! Good to see you logged on again.
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:59 PM
of course coarse grass is left standing beautiful as can be...
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