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A dense peasouper

Puffs of white fog which hung there like frozen cabbage —Donald McCaig A dense peasouper blurs her face in midwinter coarse grass left standing.

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Date: 2/3/2018 7:37:00 PM
I like how you were inspired by the frozen cabbage line! Good to see you logged on again.
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Date: 2/1/2018 7:59:00 PM
of course coarse grass is left standing beautiful as can be...
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