A Deconstruction

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A deconstruction of our form Reveals magnetic field Dual currents, both cold and warm God’s light within concealed Heart’s our true soul centre Wherein bliss throbs canter Door’s open, just enter Simple deduction A deconstruction 01-February-2022 Quietus

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2022 11:07:00 AM

Wow, what a wonderful figurative expression and eloquence in this well-crafted Quietus. I'm increasingly captivated by your excellent poetry, my friend. Kindest regards.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/1/2022 7:24:00 PM

The title is a contest prompt by Edward :) Thanks for your encouragement, Lasaad!