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A Deceptive Choice

From a distance we can choose the particulars, Next the change/ A pause of simple regret, The novice in his high profile excerpt, Relax and then, A pause to complete the smile; Still he knows all the while' A pen with paper; The chalice dancer and the fashionable decor, A midas touch onto something more' The pause that relieves the pain, In the great distance lest I refrain/ The laughter with the inner turmoil' The silence of a wakening day/ In the morning we all can honestly think better,

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Date: 8/11/2011 8:53:00 PM
Your form is rhyme or verse & please note your acronym on the bottom *D C thanks for the entry! Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations Mario on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:45:00 PM
Congrats Mario on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. awesome write.. wonderful win.. enjoy..with luv..
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:40:00 PM
Hi Mario, my contest is for women who are to write a verse as it they were Eve in the garden of Eden. Though your verse is very nice it does not fit the contest requirements. Thank so much for the thought.
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Date: 5/23/2010 10:33:00 AM
ahh yes...we've been purged by sleep! Light & Love
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Date: 4/23/2010 9:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Mario. Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol
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