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A Death In Africa

A quiver of wild dogs’ tails tufted White pompoms thrill in bloodied air Below, hapless prey prays

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 8/25/2017 10:45:00 PM
Oh Bernard! This Haiku is awesome! I feel like I'm right in the middle of the fray! I can vividly see, hear and smell this scene. A truly amazing write! :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 8/26/2017 2:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Actually, your very beautiful Fire-Water Dance, though of course totally different, inspired me to take a stab at a haiku. So thank YOU! :)