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A Deadly Pack

The restless wolves begin to howl
A rallying call for the hunt
Watching closely,  ravens caw
As hungry wolves growl

Then the pack starts off in a trot
As the alpha male leads the  lot
The hunt is on, the ravens follow
Hoping for some scraps to swallow

The elks in the distance start to run
 But wolves can run all day
A  nearby river glistens in the sun
A chance for the elk to swim away

But gray wolves are excellent swimmers too
And  they pursue their prey to the other side
The elk, now tired begin to slow
And powerful jaws deliver the death blow

The wolves now feast on their new kill
Supreme hunters of the plains
The ravens too get their fill
 As Canis Lupus howls again

3/12/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 11:32:00 PM
glad to see this on the winners list , my friend. BIG congrats.
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:41:00 PM
Joseph, A mighty interesting topic and win. Congrats!! Luv LINDA
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations !! on your fascinating win a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/14/2015 12:40:00 AM
powerful write, joseph... my best congrats on your placement!
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:34:00 AM
Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:55:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:28:00 AM
Great write Joseph! I love this rhyme it flows well and has great image. Congrats on your win. A 7...from me
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:06:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on your great poem that presents so many details about this magnificent animal. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:57:00 AM
great poem Joseph capturing well the independent spirit congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 4/12/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Shadow...
Date: 3/15/2015 6:41:00 PM
I think you did splendidly with this challenge. I want to do one eventually. I must research a bit!!
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Date: 3/14/2015 12:08:00 PM
Dear Joseph, You captured my attention in the first line and I could visualize every image you described. Wolves are remarkable creatures and you have captured their spirit so well! This poem goes to my faves. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2015 4:32:00 PM
A riveting tale Joseph. Nature has a certain circle of life...C--->A
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Date: 3/12/2015 3:18:00 PM
- Interesting and well written Joseph - I wish you best of luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2015 2:44:00 PM
beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest with this descriptive write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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