A Dead Word

A dying word echoes your life
The past will come; the future will die
Faith will fall, just as you need
If light would rise, you’d make it disease

In this word everything fades
What you like; what you distaste
The dark becomes your flavour of truth
And in this world, hope is removed

A lonely word so sure to bring
A haunting pain that makes monsters sing
Where nothing comes because nothing is
The purest hate will spread from your bliss

And since the day you held that dead word
So close to heart, it’s all you have shared
You circle through the life that is death
Through rape and spells you steal what’s left

And since the day you held on too close
You kill yourself in each living host
And now you see the world is so clear
You twisted love when love was your fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/18/2008 5:24:00 PM
this piece gives understanding as to y some kids wear black. and it's part of you but you have the ability to detach at will. very good. you have a rare tallent of this i am sure. just keep your wits about you as they say and you'll grow out of the black when it suits you. John H Loving III
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Date: 12/17/2008 6:56:00 PM
Hey, So I am officially on ElfTown now but there are no pictures of me yet. . I will be putting some of those up tomorrow. . I'm on right now if you want to chat there ;)
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Date: 12/17/2008 1:14:00 PM
Hahahaha Lol yea that's true
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Date: 12/17/2008 12:59:00 PM
I have been in love with him forever, Just never had the balls to ask him out, ya know
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Date: 12/17/2008 12:50:00 PM
I HAVE A NEW BF!!!!! YAY!!!!!
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Date: 12/17/2008 11:05:00 AM
YAY!!! I'm just sittin here doin nuttin but textin :(
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:58:00 AM
. . . . So. . Wat u doin?
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:42:00 AM
Oh! Sowwy me didn't know that :( But it was just an idea :((
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:29:00 AM
Hahahaha very funny Lol. No, but you should write the most AWESOME!!! Poem for your soon to be fiance. . ;) P.S. Cause I think that if she was to read it, It would mean the world to her. . Or better yet. . You should write her a poem (Especially For Her) And get it framed and see what she does when she reads it :)))
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Date: 12/17/2008 10:17:00 AM
You know what you should do?
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:52:00 PM
Me so tired. . I think I will try it out, But for now me sleepy. . nighty night Ian ^_^
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:42:00 PM
:) Hehehehe well now that you asked I look for more MATURE guys. . But I never have any luck
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:27:00 PM
But thats cool that you found someone to love and care for. . I mean I have a boyfriend but yea. .
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:12:00 PM
Does she know or is it a suprise?
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:05:00 PM
That's so Romantic. .
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Date: 12/16/2008 7:01:00 PM
Awwwwwwwwww!
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:54:00 PM
Oh yea, Well I get on my space when to my grandmas house every weekend. . I'm so freakin bored, What time is it where you live? I want a bf that will love me for who I am. . Sowwy random thought
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:29:00 PM
Yup, thats me! ;)
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:05:00 PM
You're sooooooo SWEET and I bet you're cute too. . Yes I have a my space just look up my name. .
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Date: 12/16/2008 5:54:00 PM
I would LOVE to get on to ElfTown but I don't have an email address :((
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Date: 12/16/2008 4:54:00 PM
I like this well done.one of the best I have read... *Breana
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Date: 12/16/2008 1:07:00 PM
I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!! It's the best one I've ever read on PoetrySoup, And it's going on my favorites and you are going on to be my favorite poet!!!! Love Your Friend Alexz ^-^
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Date: 12/13/2008 5:27:00 PM
So full of bitterness and raw emotion... a remarkable piece with excellent cadence, rhyming and compelling language. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/10/2008 3:42:00 PM
WOW...this write is so clever.....always, Christy
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Date: 12/10/2008 3:28:00 PM
This poem speaks the truth. I really enjoyed reading it. *Breana*
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