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a dazzle of zebras 
bend to the water 
mirror upon mirror

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2025 3:05:00 PM

Oh a short cute one I somehow missed

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/31/2024 10:35:00 AM

That would, indeed, be a "dazzling" sight to see.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/31/2024 11:13:00 AM

Thanks Jim . Always in their Pajamas LOL. SuZ

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/27/2024 12:22:00 PM

I can see these zebras in my mind. I enjoy this tale.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/29/2024 5:51:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed iy, Hilda. They are a beautiful animal.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2024 1:02:00 AM

I'm dazzled by mirror imagery, Suz! Well done! Best regards // paul (soupmail)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/21/2024 3:33:00 AM

Good to see you i have to say your take on this theme was brilliant, Paul . Have a beautiful day. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/19/2024 12:56:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "zebras" write. Yes, we are looking into a mirror. A fun picture... Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/20/2024 3:14:00 AM

Thanks Paula: thanks for another delightful comment. Nature sure is full of beauty and wonder, SuZ

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/16/2024 11:57:00 AM

Hi SuZ! So wonderful to see you posting again. Your senryu is "dazzling" especially the very creative last line. Best wishes for the contest! Dazzling blessings to you.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/17/2024 10:00:00 AM

Hi Sam: So glad you liked this one. I rushed it a bit. SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2024 7:08:00 PM

Amazing what you can do with a mirror image and a few well-placed words, Suzanne!! Excelsior! ~ Gershon

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/16/2024 3:43:00 AM

Hi Gershon: I appreciate your kind words. Much needed this morning. Cheers, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2024 2:32:00 PM

A lot of zebra reflections for sure. Reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/15/2024 4:45:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I hope I got the verb right. I couldn't think if it had to be singular or plural.I appreciate your visit. SuZ

Tom Woody

Date: 8/15/2024 1:42:00 PM

Beautiful senryu and photo of these awesome beasts

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/15/2024 4:52:00 PM

Hi Tom:These terms of venery are fascinating and apparently not official but come from where they appeared in literature or culture. They can also be referred to as a zeal of zebras. Glad to see you.

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