a dazzle of zebras

a dazzle of zebras 
bend to the water 
mirror upon mirror

animalartbeautifulnaturesenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2025 at 3:05 PM

Oh a short cute one I somehow missed

Jim Slaughter

August 31, 2024 at 10:35 AM

That would, indeed, be a "dazzling" sight to see.

Suzanne Delaney

August 31, 2024 at 11:13 AM

Thanks Jim . Always in their Pajamas LOL. SuZ

Hilda Greenhough

August 27, 2024 at 12:22 PM

I can see these zebras in my mind. I enjoy this tale.

Suzanne Delaney

August 29, 2024 at 5:51 AM

I am happy you enjoyed iy, Hilda. They are a beautiful animal.

Paul Callus

August 21, 2024 at 1:02 AM

I'm dazzled by mirror imagery, Suz! Well done! Best regards // paul (soupmail)

Suzanne Delaney

August 21, 2024 at 3:33 AM

Good to see you i have to say your take on this theme was brilliant, Paul . Have a beautiful day. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

August 19, 2024 at 12:56 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "zebras" write. Yes, we are looking into a mirror. A fun picture... Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Suzanne Delaney

August 20, 2024 at 3:14 AM

Thanks Paula: thanks for another delightful comment. Nature sure is full of beauty and wonder, SuZ

Sam Kauffman

August 16, 2024 at 11:57 AM

Hi SuZ! So wonderful to see you posting again. Your senryu is "dazzling" especially the very creative last line. Best wishes for the contest! Dazzling blessings to you.

Suzanne Delaney

August 17, 2024 at 10:00 AM

Hi Sam: So glad you liked this one. I rushed it a bit. SuZ