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A daytime moon

The closer I get to the sun, the further I feel from the light
My feelings are drawn a daytime moon in cloudy white
Shadows are what's left;  now simple silhouettes
I'd prefer to burn out; a torch fueled without regrets
Chemicals in the clouds that burn on the horizon as it sets
They're a blanket over me now; glowing oh so bright
Singing to each other; we are the skies duets
I'm shining now; look at us radiate, throughout the night
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March 20, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Simply beautiful. Thank you for all your kindness on the passing of my father. Hugs- On to the next poem, <3
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March 20, 2024 at 4:47 PM
You're very welcome my dear! This one's not all that complicated I like writing about how the Sun and Moon love each other :) A.S.
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