A Day's Outing

Soft whimsical wind rustles the tall trees
geese on the wing fly by in formation
honking and hooting, what a wretched din
glad as the noise fades and peace is returned 

My journey today to reach the summit
a long harduous yet an enchanting climb
butterflies so pretty flutter around
clumps of flowers sprinkled along the path

The air so very sharp and crystal clear 
to breathe it in gives me much pleasure
Fascinated I watch two young stags spar
each one is vying for supremacy

Cheerful rivulets and brooks babbling
cooling the sultry air, birds taking dips
nearly there now I have enjoyed the climb
at the top a most splendidious view

Stretched out in front of me tiny fields 
forming patchwork quilt of varying hues
Little houses and farms nestling between
Lush emerald valleys with golden corn

I have enjoyed my outing in this place
of beauty and such peaceful solitude 
a moment taken out of daily strife
the chance of a return to simple life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sivey Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 9:43 PM
This is such a beautiful write about nature and its gorgeousness! I am at peace after reading this wondrous poem Shadow! I loved reading this delightful piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:28 AM
ty Russell pleased you found it peaceful nature often is if we listen. ty for your inspiring comments Shadow x smile hug
Dunn Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:15 PM
So picture perfect is this vision i don't want to break the spell it puts into ones mind. Nice job also on it's natural content of nature it is simply beautiful. By the way thank for your comment on music enjoyed the review. cheri
Hamilton Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:21 PM
hi Cherl ty I am happy you shared my vision ty for lovely review Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Sounds lovey, I can see why our resident queen of nature love it, I agree with Nette "how awesome this is".
Hamilton Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:55 PM
ty Rick it seem to work ok Shadow x smile hug
Onclaud Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 2:05 PM
you bring me joy with this invigorating connection with nature... how awesome this is, shadow.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 3:49 PM
ty Nette so happy you got pleasure from it Shadow x smile hug
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Enjoyed reading your peaceful work..It took me to the scene..Soup mail ...Sara
Hamilton Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:16 AM
hi Sara ty very much and also for your heads up appreciated Shadow x smile hug
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