A Daydream

A Daydream

A daydream crashes into my deepest gentle night's sleep
holding sweet those memories I wish forever to keep
Of your sweet touch and beautiful, happy soothing smiles
those that I longed for as we were separated thousands of miles

Such visions I have of your beautiful lips and dark hair
so real I felt I was already in your loving arms right there
How well I remember that blessed night and following day
when duty forced me to depart while you had to sadly stay

Those parting verses you so faithfully read to me 
were sweet kisses that remind me of your parting plea
That I live to return to faithfully, happily marry you
as you wait like the thirsty grass for the early morning dew...Robert L.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horsman Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 7:54 PM
I'm right the way back at your first post on soup, Robert. always with poets i respect i do this, and so pleased to be here having just read another amazing poem, of love.
Lindley Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Thank you my good friend. Such a pleasure to read your reply and admit that it is indeed a very fine gift given unto me. God bless, always my friend. Robert
Zahid Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:00 AM
I wanted to check your first poem, and Holy God, you have written loads of poem. This one is quite romantic... Keep writing.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 11:20 PM
Very romantic poem, Robert! I revisited this tenderly expressed debut poem. True devotion set against the backdrop of external uncertainty and turmoil makes this poetic offering a treasured keepsake for us readers, as well as your soulmate. I am always curious to see what each poet/poetess set forth as their firstfruit offering on PSoup. Yours was a delightful feast for the heart. You are a wondrously God-gifted poet, my dear friend. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Oh, such a lovely first write, Robert...so romantic!
Ashley Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:53 PM
I am awe-struck, my dear friend, by the romantic longing and expressive deep feelings of your ardent poem. Your potent pen inks passionate poetry only you can write, dear Robert. Your last line, especially, is a beauty of a poetic gem! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Indeed, I haven’t forgotten about our collaboration, my dear friend, as it is always my pleasure to write with you. I’ve been working on my part recently and should have my draft ready for your viewing soon :))
Lindley Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Thank you my friend. Always a pleasure to hear from you. I look forward to finishing our collaboration..
Lee Sr. Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Was lead to revisit this passionate jewel of a remembrance of true love twit a husband and his wife..praise worthy of one of God's daughter Peace Bro. Lindley
Lee Sr. Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 9:48 AM
This is beauty from the soul. A wonderful write from a loving husband to his adorn wife. Simply loving bless you my friend, and more abundant blessings for you and your wife. Have a blessed and prosperous and glorious anniversary. Write on James
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Very loving and gorgeously expressed poem, Robert. You write w/such passion and conviction. A true romantic in every sense of the word. Another gem cast to us right from the very beginning. Love always, my poetic friend.
Lindley Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Thanks my friend. I wrote exactly what I recall of that experience over a decade ago. We will have been be married 12 happy years this coming December.
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Your poem was written from the unique perspective of someone who was not present in the painting. Very creative, Robert, and quite romantic. Congratulations on your win!
Lindley Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Thanks for the reply my friend.. As always when one writes from the heart the words ring true and readers see and feel it too. Thanks much..
Gibson Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations!
Lindley Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Thank you. Was a joy to write too...
Haick Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 9:47 PM
A real gem, Robert! One to add to my Favs. List! I love romantic poems and this is great! Annalise
Lindley Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Thanks much my friend. Very pleased you like it enough to add to your favorites!
Lindley Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 5:18 PM
Thank you. Happy that you enjoyed it.
Vaso Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Beautiful poem, well done!
Lindley Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Poetry is much like chess, a blinding love that can consume it's host. Author... ME...
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