Jimmy Mxxxxx Poet Rhyme

A Day Spent In Nature

A day spent in nature is better than most
From the verdant grass to the mountainous trees
The chirping of birds and even the bees
The wind blowing through your hair
The smell of flowers in the air
Make you want to stay outside all day.
If storms come to your dismay,
Don’t be upset, just enjoy the beauty of it
The splatting rain and powerful thunder
Make you stare in awe and wonder
Why not do this every day?
Once the night approaches,
Stare fixated on the blazing sky and sunset,
And gaze up at the stars and forget
The worries of yesterday and tomorrow
A day spent in nature is better than most

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Skat A May 15, 2014 at 9:13 AM JIMMY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2014 at 3:17 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jimmy :) - I choose your first lovely nature poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A May 8, 2014 at 10:50 PM Nature sure is better, than most things...Jimmy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@,