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A Day On the Beach

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My own art, it is also on the cover of my book , "Beachcomers' 

Summer beneath the azure sky, Seagulls rest on the air ripple, Outward, appearing so simple; Loud and hungry as they go by. Calm sea on a clear afternoon; Lost in scented briny cool drifts. Sound of the sonorousness lifts Deep navy waters pleasant tune. Two barefooted young boys basking In the sun building sandcastles, Exploring tides pools, sand-beetles; They piddle round and keep looking. They run against the ebbing waves In mirth, and back as it rolls in Breaking on the beach where it's been. Waves emerge takes what beaches saves. Sun yawns a whiff of cool damp air, A day of fun upon their mind. Two weary boys leave prints behind, Sand on bare feet and windblown hair. 1/10/2021

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Date: 1/10/2021 10:20:00 PM
Hi Eve Since you read one of my poems and commented I thought I would read one of yours. I am glad I chose to read this one because it is really cold tonight however after reading this poem I could picture myself enjoying the beach on a hot summer day. Thanks. Great poem. Evelyn
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Date: 1/10/2021 8:24:00 PM
I too, cannot see the picture Eve. Lovely poem, truly wishes one was there...
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Date: 1/10/2021 8:06:00 PM
Lovely pictorial beach scene and story, Eve. Summer's dreaming! :) gw
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Date: 1/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Eve, I believe your joy shines through along the shores. A beautiful poem seen through gifted eyes. -Richard
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Date: 1/10/2021 2:47:00 AM
Enchanting memories. Pity we cannot see your picture. ~~
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Date: 1/10/2021 1:28:00 AM
Lovely. I don't know how to do this form and am not sure I can figure it out... also, I can't see your picture? It's not showing up. Love and prayers and God bless you too
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