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A Day In Time

beginnings aglow time passes without consent spring bids us farewell

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Date: 10/22/2022 10:24:00 AM
"time passes without consent"...excellent line, Franci. And, ain't it the truth!
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 10/22/2022 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jim!
Date: 5/18/2022 9:16:00 PM
Nice....and on target, especially with "time passes without consent". Probably good that it does, but it doesn't feel good. Haiku....nice!
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 10/22/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Andy, and apologies for the late response.

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