"a Day In the Pool"

A day in the pool unlike any other
Feeling the spark of love
The water boiled between these lover’s
The passion was there
From every long hot kiss
“Oh” how entangled we would get
In every gentle touch
In every loving caress
In every gazing look
 In every long deep stare
That day in the pool
Real love we shared
That day in the pool 
Was all it’s own
Funny how the water
Made our love grow
On that day
We took a new road
Hitching a ride
With love we’d go
up&down & turned around
Somehow finding our way back to now
So thank you LORD
For that day in the pool
For we conquered the day
and our love ruled...
by.Scottie b garrow.12/27/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 9:07 AM
You have SoupMail Scott
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January 1, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Very enjoyable read...Marty
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