Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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A Day In the Loo

sick to my stomach, this is bull
    it's in a cross over plummet
      just want to lay on my hammock
        close to the loo, bucket that's full

  I'm hungry, I'm afraid to eat
    water even has an up pull
      my baby was brave, not fussy
        and here grandma a big pansy

4/4/2022

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Gershon Wolf April 6, 2022 at 8:53 PM A real lu-lu, Eve! ~ W(ater) C(loset) Fields

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2022 at 7:23 PM Fun and funny, Eve. Nothing like a loo limerick

Rico Leffanta April 5, 2022 at 11:50 AM "There is a season..." so you know the cycle will end, but quite sadly, "the wheel of the gods grind slowly" Better days ahead! Aloha! Eve Roper April 5, 2022 at 12:20 PM Hello, Rico, My days are coming... Blessings my friend

Caren Krutsinger April 5, 2022 at 11:25 AM I feel for you! Get better Eve! Eve Roper April 5, 2022 at 12:19 PM Thank you, Caren, second day and still feeling a little a weak. Hugs my friend

Victor Buhagiar April 5, 2022 at 1:34 AM I don't have your symptoms, but I wake up really tired but feel better in the evening. Get well soon. Hugs Eve Roper April 5, 2022 at 9:28 AM I hope you don't get ill, my friend. I almost think it was my diverticulitis, but this is the first time it lasted all day..

Jeff Kyser April 4, 2022 at 4:15 PM sphincter, sphincter, please hold tight.// you're my main squeeze, amiright?// I'll turn off Disney's Frozen show, // Don't need you singing "Let it go!" // Hope you get better soon! Eve Roper April 4, 2022 at 4:43 PM me too, thank you..