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A Day In the Loo

sick to my stomach, this is bull
    it's in a cross over plummet
      just want to lay on my hammock
        close to the loo, bucket that's full

  I'm hungry, I'm afraid to eat
    water even has an up pull
      my baby was brave, not fussy
        and here grandma a big pansy

4/4/2022
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Date: 4/6/2022 8:53:00 PM
A real lu-lu, Eve! ~ W(ater) C(loset) Fields
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Date: 4/5/2022 7:23:00 PM
Fun and funny, Eve. Nothing like a loo limerick
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Date: 4/5/2022 11:50:00 AM
"There is a season..." so you know the cycle will end, but quite sadly, "the wheel of the gods grind slowly" Better days ahead! Aloha!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 12:20:00 PM
Hello, Rico, My days are coming... Blessings my friend
Date: 4/5/2022 11:25:00 AM
I feel for you! Get better Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Caren, second day and still feeling a little a weak. Hugs my friend
Date: 4/5/2022 1:34:00 AM
I don't have your symptoms, but I wake up really tired but feel better in the evening. Get well soon. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 9:28:00 AM
I hope you don't get ill, my friend. I almost think it was my diverticulitis, but this is the first time it lasted all day..
Date: 4/4/2022 4:15:00 PM
sphincter, sphincter, please hold tight.// you're my main squeeze, amiright?// I'll turn off Disney's Frozen show, // Don't need you singing "Let it go!" // Hope you get better soon!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/4/2022 4:43:00 PM
me too, thank you..
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