A Day In the Loo

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sick to my stomach, this is bull it's in a cross over plummet just want to lay on my hammock close to the loo, bucket that's full I'm hungry, I'm afraid to eat water even has an up pull my baby was brave, not fussy and here grandma a big pansy 4/4/2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/6/2022 8:53:00 PM

A real lu-lu, Eve! ~ W(ater) C(loset) Fields

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2022 7:23:00 PM

Fun and funny, Eve. Nothing like a loo limerick

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/5/2022 11:50:00 AM

"There is a season..." so you know the cycle will end, but quite sadly, "the wheel of the gods grind slowly" Better days ahead! Aloha!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 12:20:00 PM

Hello, Rico, My days are coming... Blessings my friend

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2022 11:25:00 AM

I feel for you! Get better Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Caren, second day and still feeling a little a weak. Hugs my friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2022 1:34:00 AM

I don't have your symptoms, but I wake up really tired but feel better in the evening. Get well soon. Hugs

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2022 9:28:00 AM

I hope you don't get ill, my friend. I almost think it was my diverticulitis, but this is the first time it lasted all day..

Jeff Kyser

Date: 4/4/2022 4:15:00 PM

sphincter, sphincter, please hold tight.// you're my main squeeze, amiright?// I'll turn off Disney's Frozen show, // Don't need you singing "Let it go!" // Hope you get better soon!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/4/2022 4:43:00 PM

me too, thank you..