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A Day In September

(09/11/2011) One day in September I lie awake on a couch try to remember, Where did I buy this cracker? I believe it was last night when I was sober Duh! I’ve been way much better, It must be the drink or whatever So, it couldn’t be when I was ‘up’ whatsoever The cracker is not bad however Tenth of September, Munching cracker while still in hangover After last night shooing anger For Brian Strand 'September' contest

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Guneet Singh

Date: 9/15/2011 4:07:00 AM

awesome work dinda

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/11/2011 10:20:00 PM

A new way of incorporating September into verse. Enjoyed it though

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2011 6:02:00 PM

Dinda, this one fooled me. I was expecting nature or a remembrance of 9/11. Anyway, it was a humorous little memory of a September day and I enjoyed it. How are you? I can't see comments today unless I click on my name on my poems list and view my comments there. something seems to be weird at Soup today! Luv,Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/11/2011 9:20:00 AM

Today a truth I leave here for you. I wish I had fancy words to write a comment to you but I don't. I did enjoy reading your poetry Dinda. If I did not enjoy reading your poetry you would not be reading this now. I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol