Dinda Minardi Poet Rhyme

A Day In September

(09/11/2011)

One day in September
I lie awake on a couch try to remember,
Where did I buy this cracker?
I believe it was last night when I was sober
Duh! I’ve been way much better,
It must be the drink or whatever
So, it couldn’t be when I was ‘up’ whatsoever
The cracker is not bad however
Tenth of September,
Munching cracker while still in hangover
After last night shooing anger


For Brian Strand 'September' contest

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Guneet Singh September 15, 2011 at 4:07 AM awesome work dinda

Elizabeth Wesley September 11, 2011 at 10:20 PM A new way of incorporating September into verse. Enjoyed it though

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2011 at 6:02 PM Dinda, this one fooled me. I was expecting nature or a remembrance of 9/11. Anyway, it was a humorous little memory of a September day and I enjoyed it. How are you? I can't see comments today unless I click on my name on my poems list and view my comments there. something seems to be weird at Soup today! Luv,Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown September 11, 2011 at 9:20 AM Today a truth I leave here for you. I wish I had fancy words to write a comment to you but I don't. I did enjoy reading your poetry Dinda. If I did not enjoy reading your poetry you would not be reading this now. I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol