Thompson Emate Poet Rhyme

A Day In May

Seated in its ambience,
Longed for this dalliance,
I'm in nature's embrace,
Away from life’s rat race,
Surrounded by colours,
Mix of different flavours,
Permeate the entire realm,
I’m laced on nature’s hem.



May 10, 2022.

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Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2022 at 2:04 PM I liked how this one was kind of different and with shorter lines. if you'd used fewer commas, it would have fared better. That last line was FANTASTIC. congrats in my contest Thompson Emate May 15, 2022 at 3:46 PM Thank you, Andrea. It's an honour.