A day at the mall

Busy shopping day 
lunch with family and friends
playing the arcade
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Rodgers Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 11:06 AM
Dear Karen, you captured a whole slice of modern life in just a few beats and the humor and observation land perfectly. A crisp, relatable senryu. Winter Blessings, Karen, Daniel
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February 19, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Thank you Daniel! It was a good day!
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