A Day At the Magical Forest

One day of exploration in the forest,
Enjoying the view while taking a rest,
A whirling sound I hear from a distance,
Followed by sparkling lights. Oh what a glance!

World around me turn into a magical kingdom,
Colorful leaves, flying fairies and they look awesome,
I am lying on the bed of roses with a sweet fragrance,
Is it a dream or a nightmare that I witness in existence?

The soothing sound of waterfalls behind the tree,
Lovely fairies were bathing and smiling at me,
Unicorn with pure tame beauty standing proudly,
Ready to gallop waiting for me to ride in eternity.

If it’s a dream I don’t want to wake up anymore,
Winged tiny fireflies humming beautifully I swore,
Tall trees sway softly to celebrate a magical day,
I couldn’t stand still lying on the bed of roses sleepily.

I close my eyes to cherish this moment of happiness
Unforgettable and enjoyable day at the magical forest,
I utter a prayer of gladness and smile contentedly,
This is a great experience for me and the best day,


March 11, 2014
9th Place Winner
For Roger Horsch's "Magical Forest" Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:09 AM
A delightful, whimsical read. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, MariaDiding. Congrats on this win!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Amazingly beautiful piece - excellent write that I enjoyed reading! Pandita
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March 29, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Maria, I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, maria
Horsch Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Congrats on your win Maria, And thanks for entering my contest. It was fun.......Roger
Liwayway Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 7:48 AM
thanks a lot friend roger ;)
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 9:56 PM
Hey, I am the first to come and tell you that you made the winners' list. BIG congrats to you, maria.
Liwayway Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Thank you so much Friend Andrea ;) have a nice day always :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 2:49 PM
A dreamy and colorful picture you presented. WEll done, and good luck in the contest, Maria.
Liwayway Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 7:47 AM
thanks friend andrea ;)
Gasun Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Hi my very dear friend Maria. I'm glad I've dropped by here today & read this very beautiful & delightful poem of yours.. It's a very wonderful dream which one could dream & wish not to wake up yet. I love & enjoyed thoroughly reading it this afternoon. I guess this is for a contest. Good luck my friend. How r u? I'm off to school today (my leg cram got worst);)) 'cuz of swimming this wkend. Hope to see u around soon. Miss u! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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