A Day At School

3-6-9 format created by Emile J. Pinet. The scientist and inventor Nikola Tesla believed that the numbers 3-6-9 held great significance, and in deference to him, the 3-6-9 was invented. An eighteen line rhyming verse with the following rhyme scheme: (aba -  cdcefe  - ghgijiklk,) with a  syllable count of 333, 66666, 999999999. It looks best centered.
 

School bell rang Pledge was said Children sang. Reading first on the bill With groups according to Proficiency and skill; Arithmetic quickly Followed before lunch time-- A subject most prickly. Post lunch came lessons in history Geography quickly followed it Along with science, a mystery. When we were sleepiest, teacher read A story to hold our interest We tried to keep from nodding our heads. Last came music and creative art End of the school day slowly approached, We readied ourselves, glad to depart.

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Date: 6/30/2021 11:15:00 PM
"When we were sleepiest, teacher read A story to hold our interest We tried to keep from nodding our heads." This is so true! They always do this after lunch, when we are the most ready for a nap!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2021 7:42:00 AM
I never could figure out why they didn't just give us a thirty minute nap after lunch, especially back in the days before air-conditioning. It was torture!
Date: 6/30/2021 7:16:00 AM
Great poem, my friend, good use of the (3-6-9) form...it reminded me of my high school days my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile. I enjoyed working with the 3-6-9 form.
Date: 6/29/2021 7:29:00 PM
Milton, I think you captured the essence of an entire day of school. You did very well with this new form! I have yet to try it. Blessings, Kim M
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I gave it my best shot!
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