Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

A Dawn of Beauty

Amber - sunshine arises in the east
To clamber - to the top, fain to feel Mother Nature.
Lavender fragrance butter   bees, butterflies, hummingbirds
With a splash of nectar that swirls round, farther
A calm pensive melody of breathless banter
11/7/2021


Something Beautiful 5 Line Rhyme Poetry Contest
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Caren Krutsinger November 22, 2021 at 12:03 AM My favorite line"Lavender fragrance butter bees, butterflies, hummingbirds" - lovely imagery Eve.

Lindsay Laurie November 19, 2021 at 8:20 PM Hello Eve ... your verse reads truly as a dawn of beauty - thanks Eve - Lindsay

Paula Goldsmith November 12, 2021 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I love this and I love Lavender. The dawn is a pretty time of the day. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Charles Messina November 11, 2021 at 1:21 PM A beautiful write, Eve. Unfortunately the rhyme pattern was a little off or this would have placed higher. Oops! Anyway very well written...Congratulations on your placement! Hugs Charlie

Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2021 at 1:53 PM Lovely imagery and scent! I feel I am there.

Rico Leffanta November 8, 2021 at 10:25 AM Interesting that Native Americans still rise to witness the dawn whilst other Americans just switch on their TV . . . . .Enjoyed! Eve Roper November 8, 2021 at 1:33 PM I wait a few hours to turn on the TV.. But I don't have channels or cable I just have WIFI .I watch Netflix or Hulu

Vijay Pandit November 8, 2021 at 6:25 AM Indeed a beauteous dawn sparkles through your words, Eve. Splendidly done.

Victor Buhagiar November 8, 2021 at 1:25 AM Beauty is everywhere in this poem. Great imagery. Hugs.