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A Dawn of Beauty

Amber - sunshine arises in the east To clamber - to the top, fain to feel Mother Nature. Lavender fragrance butter bees, butterflies, hummingbirds With a splash of nectar that swirls round, farther A calm pensive melody of breathless banter 11/7/2021 Something Beautiful 5 Line Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina

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Date: 11/22/2021 12:03:00 AM
My favorite line"Lavender fragrance butter bees, butterflies, hummingbirds" - lovely imagery Eve.
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:20:00 PM
Hello Eve ... your verse reads truly as a dawn of beauty - thanks Eve - Lindsay
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I love this and I love Lavender. The dawn is a pretty time of the day. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/11/2021 1:21:00 PM
A beautiful write, Eve. Unfortunately the rhyme pattern was a little off or this would have placed higher. Oops! Anyway very well written...Congratulations on your placement! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2021 1:53:00 PM
Lovely imagery and scent! I feel I am there.
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Date: 11/8/2021 10:25:00 AM
Interesting that Native Americans still rise to witness the dawn whilst other Americans just switch on their TV . . . . .Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/8/2021 1:33:00 PM
I wait a few hours to turn on the TV.. But I don't have channels or cable I just have WIFI .I watch Netflix or Hulu
Date: 11/8/2021 6:25:00 AM
Indeed a beauteous dawn sparkles through your words, Eve. Splendidly done.
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Date: 11/8/2021 1:25:00 AM
Beauty is everywhere in this poem. Great imagery. Hugs.
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