A Dawn - Come Too Late - For Trashed No 2

A Dawn – Come Too Late



For we sometimes catch death – unaware
in our haste to live life on the edge
shout the dead words – who will care
if I fail to honor life’s pledge
bypass death on my way to the ledge.

For they feel not what I feel
entrusting my fate to the wind
touching a moment surreal
reaching to touch death’s – dead end
embracing his cape as a friend.

So do these moments encroach
sweeping across the pains face
evil’s attempt to quick poach
those who succumb to such fate
in the darkness – a dawn – come too late.




8/29/2015 - posted 8/29/2015
John G. Lawless

Trashed @2 contest -- sponsor -- Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Moore Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 5:35 PM
"Quick poach" Nice work
Bangalee Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 10:14 PM
xcellent poem
A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:07 PM
John, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win John! Wonder why such a beautiful poem got trashed in any contest?
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Congrats John on this poem winning in this contest. I love dark poems and the imagination it takes to create them.
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Powerful, deep and dark, John. Congratulations on your well-deserved win this time. Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:01 PM
a deep dark write John which grabbed my attention from start to end - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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