A Daughters Voice

(DRAFT ~ 1)

      For years her soul yearned to hear the word
                          MOM 
      from the little lips of her sweet baby girl. 
                 Her heart ached from it's absence
      and her daughters too. Replaying the last conversation
                 over, and over, and praying, and over again
       Knowing one day she too will be free, 
                      free to come home
       free to be her, and free from an abusers grasp
                        and for me..... 
       The sound of her sweet voice that uplifts the heart in it's 
             saddest states and heals the wounds of past pains
        will return to play the most beautiful sound. Even when said 
                    with HER own little attitude days.
       My daughter, my mini-me, my best-friend, and my world; stay strong, 
             stay enlightened, stay prayed up, and seek knowledge.
      
      (Shyne930,2012)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/7/2012 1:49:00 PM
Keep going on it I enjoyed what you have so far. But.......your schooling comes first. When you have a little free time then you can work on your writing. I will be here and if I miss something let me know. I am coming down with the flu or something so won't be on a lot but I do check soupymail everyday. Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Love, Carol
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Anna Borsick
Date: 3/7/2012 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, and awww I am sorry, I hope you get better soon. Have a good evening.
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