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A Date For the Diary

I wouldn't want to meet again the guy I met tonight; it really was the saddest case of hatred at first sight. based on a friend's description of a blind date for Susan's What I Wouldn't Want to Relive contest

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Skat A

Date: 2/10/2014 4:22:00 PM

Jack, sad it is.. Congrats.. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2014 3:39:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 1/10/2014 12:39:00 PM

My hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend Jack. thank u so much for sharing. I enjoyed your poem. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/9/2014 9:31:00 PM

Congratulation for a fine win in the contest. enjoyed the poem, Jack

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/9/2014 10:09:00 AM

Yikes.......I'm thinking that Cupid missed his target!!! Well done Jack !!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2013 10:20:00 PM

Great Couplet, Jack! A winner in my book! Sad guy carrying that baggage.. Thanks for reading my last poem. xxAnnalise

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/16/2013 7:36:00 PM

Gave me a chuckle this one Jack, good to stop by hope things are good with you Joe..'

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/16/2013 1:44:00 AM

Blnd dates don't always work out - though there are exceptions, Your poem is food for thought!. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish 1

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2013 5:46:00 AM

That would be an awful blind date..Way to go with a different approach to a contest..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/14/2013 9:26:00 PM

This is an intriguing write my friend! You have masterfully put together a sad poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 9:25:00 PM

you are the master of terse verse my friend and Susan ought to love this one as well!!!

Donna Jones

Date: 12/14/2013 7:46:00 PM

Nice job ...don't think I've ever heard of hate at first sight....really must be awful....good luck in the contest...:-)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/14/2013 5:02:00 PM

ha! you've summed it up in just one perfect couplet...