Jack Horne Poet Couplet

A Date For the Diary

I wouldn't want to meet again the guy I met tonight;
it really was the saddest case of hatred at first sight.

based on a friend's description of a blind date

for Susan's What I Wouldn't Want to Relive contest

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Skat A February 10, 2014 at 4:22 PM Jack, sad it is.. Congrats.. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

Len Gasun January 10, 2014 at 12:39 PM My hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend Jack. thank u so much for sharing. I enjoyed your poem. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Dr.Ram Mehta January 9, 2014 at 9:31 PM Congratulation for a fine win in the contest. enjoyed the poem, Jack

Carrie Richards January 9, 2014 at 10:09 AM Yikes.......I'm thinking that Cupid missed his target!!! Well done Jack !!!

Audrey Haick December 21, 2013 at 10:20 PM Great Couplet, Jack! A winner in my book! Sad guy carrying that baggage.. Thanks for reading my last poem. xxAnnalise

Joe Maverick December 16, 2013 at 7:36 PM Gave me a chuckle this one Jack, good to stop by hope things are good with you Joe..'

Matthew Anish December 16, 2013 at 1:44 AM Blnd dates don't always work out - though there are exceptions, Your poem is food for thought!. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish 1

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2013 at 5:46 AM That would be an awful blind date..Way to go with a different approach to a contest..Sara

Russell Sivey December 14, 2013 at 9:26 PM This is an intriguing write my friend! You have masterfully put together a sad poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2013 at 9:25 PM you are the master of terse verse my friend and Susan ought to love this one as well!!!

Donna Jones December 14, 2013 at 7:46 PM Nice job ...don't think I've ever heard of hate at first sight....really must be awful....good luck in the contest...:-)

Ilene Bauer December 14, 2013 at 5:02 PM ha! you've summed it up in just one perfect couplet...