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A Darkness Falling

I fear the thickening shadows darkening the canyons of the mind. ©12/27/2019 A thief who Steal your thoughts Poetry Contest

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/30/2019 6:50:00 PM

Great write, John. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/30/2019 5:57:00 PM

reminds me of my mum's fading memory John:-( congrats on your win:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2019 5:34:00 PM

this one seems also to be about dementia. Third one I am seeing on that theme today. It never entered my mind to do one like that. Your wrote this line very cleverly, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2019 12:23:00 PM

- A good and brilliant line for this contest, congratulations on your win, John :) - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/30/2019 6:54:00 AM

Canyons is a clever word to describe the mind with this great write, congrats on your win John. Blessings, Jennifer.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/30/2019 5:16:00 AM

A first place for me.Congratulations on your win, Kai

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/29/2019 9:06:00 PM

Canyons of the mind..beautiful.. Congrats..

Bobby May

Date: 12/29/2019 7:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement! Excellent!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2019 10:45:00 PM

good one for the contest...love the image of shadows falling over the canyons... best wishes in the contest :) hugs