A Darkness Falling

I fear the thickening shadows darkening the canyons of the mind.


©12/27/2019

A thief who Steal your thoughts Poetry Contest
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Messina Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Great write, John. Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:57 PM
reminds me of my mum's fading memory John:-( congrats on your win:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:34 PM
this one seems also to be about dementia. Third one I am seeing on that theme today. It never entered my mind to do one like that. Your wrote this line very cleverly, John.
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 12:23 PM
- A good and brilliant line for this contest, congratulations on your win, John :) - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Canyons is a clever word to describe the mind with this great write, congrats on your win John. Blessings, Jennifer.
Neumann Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:16 AM
A first place for me.Congratulations on your win, Kai
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Canyons of the mind..beautiful.. Congrats..
May Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Congratulations on your placement! Excellent!!
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:45 PM
good one for the contest...love the image of shadows falling over the canyons... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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