A Dark Point in Time - Poem 1020

At some point our paths crossed,
Valentine’s Day 2020 at a stupid party 
all sanity was tossed. 

At one point you charmed me, 
Your boyish humour and warm eyes,
Made me dive into insecurity and naivety. 
 
At some point I thought you were nice,
But good boys don’t meet you after 10
And neither are they colder than ice. 

At one point you said I was too haunted,
That someone trying too hard 
Was the last thing you wanted. 

At some point I found a different guy, 
And that’s when you realised 
You were too rash to say goodbye. 

At one point you crept in like a snake, 
Said that I was way too memorable 
And moved me like an earthquake 

At some point you ignored my NO 
Forced yourself and laughed,
Like adults in a freak show. 

At one point I hated you, 
Hated your ignorance and denial,
About what you put me through. 

At some point I forgot you existed, 
It took months of therapy,
But I finally felt free and lifted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 24, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Dear Sue, I didn't quite get the title 1020? I would of thought you might have considered naming it, "At some point". There are so many women out there who have had similar horrific experiences and I applaud your bravery in sharing this and the fact that you sought out professional help to get you thru it. God bless and stay strong
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November 27, 2023 at 2:45 AM
Hi Nancy, Thank you so much for reading my poem and for the kind words! It really means a lot. Honestly, I didn't know what to name it. I couldn't really think of a suitable title so I named it the date I wrote the poem. But in hindsight, a name would really help. Thank you and God bless you too!
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