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A Dark Nightmare

A dark nightmare- dementia is a living Hell that grinds the mind away while one's aware- it's crumbling very well. Lewy Body Dementia- grim adversity; unlike Alzheimer's- which dulls one's reality, this victim feels mind's sparsity- the pain of it fragmenting- utterly aware. New call defines; was labeled first as Parkinson's. Though Lewy may show physical declines- worse are brain afflictions; hallucinations, memory loss, resonate- while victims know inside- these changes dominate; no cure- just death will terminate. With Hell on earth- a shattered family resigns. June 17, 2019 Form Used: 'Crumbling Rhyme' invented by Constance La France

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Date: 6/18/2019 9:00:00 PM
Dear Sandra: Your poem defines the sadness of a cruel disease and you have written it with such emotion. Beautifully rendered! My prayers are with your son in law.
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