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A Dark Fantasy

I’m on a planet with a golden kiss It shimmers with glory, such bliss! As I zoom in, it turns into a dark land Peep in, I’m afraid, I cannot stand! In darkness, I see a bright glowing tower Inside, a plethora of so called ‘man’ power Zoom in; I see ‘beast’ kind disguised as ‘man’ kind Alas! Not a single kind beast could I find I hear roars of uncivilized beings And moans of so-called weaklings I see a trail of emotional turmoil Those 7 deadly sins wrapped in a dazzling foil Gifted to humanity, his power, his grey matter It separates humans from animals and allows us to shatter The once created planet with a golden kiss Will it ever show the signs of holy bliss?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/20/2013 7:05:00 AM
Great poem!!!!:D
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Date: 1/8/2013 12:36:00 AM
The title seems almost a contradiction, but the title drew me to read it. I like the poem. I'm surprised there haven't been any comments yet. Most of the lines can actually be internalized to reflect the self, as well as projected onto society, nice poem.
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Neha Godambe
Date: 1/8/2013 1:16:00 AM
Dear...I am glad you read it and liked it :) Thank you :D

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